4. good concluding sentence that sums up what you've spoken throughout the speech. --- 5. you put too much emphasis which can be helpful in stressing importance, but other times they are unnecessary.
6. bare foot seems little ironic when you are talking about etiquette.
1. great topic. unaware,yet useful information.
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3. each parts are clearly divided.
4. good concluding sentence that sums up what you've spoken throughout the speech.
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5. you put too much emphasis which can be helpful in stressing importance, but other times they are unnecessary.
6. bare foot seems little ironic when you are talking about etiquette.