1. I think the flow of your speech was great. You didn't hesitate nor pause during the speech, maintaining a constant pace throughout the presentation. 2. I also think your use of visual aid was very good, since it was a very effective tool which helped listeners far better understand what you were saying. 3. I was very surprised that you seemed not to be nervous at all. I think this was possible because you maintained a very stable stance and posture during the speech, which I think was great. Your hand gestures and body language was also good, which seemed natural. 4. But, I think your presentation would be even better if you care a little bit more about your tense when you speak your sentences, because I think the wrong use of tense might confuse your audience members.
1. Her topic is exotic and ineresting so it was enough to take my interest. Also, in the introduction, she divded her topic into 3 parts and it made me easy to understand the structure of her speech.
2. Her posture or eye contact was alomost good. She didn't swing her body and stood well so it didn't mke us irritated and helped us to concentrated on her speech. Also she didn't watch other place but I think if she maintain more eye contact with audience instead of the screen, it would be better.
3. About her gesture, she used proper hand gestures for her speech. It helped me undersatnad the contents of her speech.
4. Although her voice was calm and comfortable to listen, I think it would be better if she use some voice inflection if her speech. It can help her emphasize the important point or the important part that she felt.
1. I think the flow of your speech was great. You didn't hesitate nor pause during the speech, maintaining a constant pace throughout the presentation.
ReplyDelete2. I also think your use of visual aid was very good, since it was a very effective tool which helped listeners far better understand what you were saying.
3. I was very surprised that you seemed not to be nervous at all. I think this was possible because you maintained a very stable stance and posture during the speech, which I think was great. Your hand gestures and body language was also good, which seemed natural.
4. But, I think your presentation would be even better if you care a little bit more about your tense when you speak your sentences, because I think the wrong use of tense might confuse your audience members.
1. Her topic is exotic and ineresting so it was enough to take my interest. Also, in the introduction, she divded her topic into 3 parts and it made me easy to understand the structure of her speech.
ReplyDelete2. Her posture or eye contact was alomost good. She didn't swing her body and stood well so it didn't mke us irritated and helped us to concentrated on her speech. Also she didn't watch other place but I think if she maintain more eye contact with audience instead of the screen, it would be better.
3. About her gesture, she used proper hand gestures for her speech. It helped me undersatnad the contents of her speech.
4. Although her voice was calm and comfortable to listen, I think it would be better if she use some voice inflection if her speech. It can help her emphasize the important point or the important part that she felt.