http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=1t9J_dx3W5I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=krJNE2yarCA&feature=player_detailpage
Thanks for cameraman/woman's excellent work, my speech was divided into 2 parts.
But I'll protect his/her anonymity and bring it to my grave :)
1. Structure: Contents were fine but three parts of his speech, intro and conclusion were not clear. If the presenter had summarized his points and addressed clear objective of his speech, his presentation might have been better.
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3. Posture: He stood in a gently manner but didn't make any body gestures during his speech.
4. Strong points: He didn't rely on his scripts but remained his eye contacts with the audience over the course of his presentation.
5. Weak points: He can put emphasis on his message when dealing with each point by differing voice tone or making hand gestures. He can reach conclusion at the end of his speech.