Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Hyeji Lee / Informativ​e Speech / Wed. 11 a.m.

Hello, here I am, Gimjang :)

This is my informative speech video clip on coffee variations.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2yhSBnniZI

4 comments:

  1. Aram Cho

    1. Well prepared Power Point - audience can easily understand what the presenter is talking about by watching Power Point.

    2. The speaker is making audience to
    participate and focus on presentation by asking questions.

    3. Her voice is loud enough for all the audience to hear and her talking speed is appropriate for all of audience to understand each word.

    4. The topic and the information that speaker prepared is quite useful.

    5. I think she did a very good job on this presentation. To be honest I wasn’t able to find out what she has to improve but if I really have to find out what she has to improve I will say because she is already good at speaking in English, it will be okay for her to speak a little bit faster.

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  2. 1. Her pronunciation was clear and her voice was loud enough. So, it was convenient to listen her speech.

    2. She barely rely on her script...Maybe never!

    3. It was really hard to find what could be improved in her speech. I just found a little stammering but almost all the presenters often do that.

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  3. 1. Her topic is interesting for me because I also interested in the coffee and I have a experience to work in a coffee shop as part-time job. So I could responed well when listening her speech.

    2. The volume of her voice is adequate for understanding, and
    articulation is also nice.

    3. The organization is also nice, especially body paragraph.
    Her explanation is so precisely that I could discern kinds of coffee easily at once. Moreover, since she used lots of images, I could understand easily. But, if she added the evaluation or her opinion about Korean coffee trend, it could be better speech.

    4. So , in that point, conclusion is little bit short. To be a better speech, evaluation or critics about the topic is needed, even though it is informative speech.

    5. Word and expression is simple and adequate for audiences. I could understand fully without problems

    6. Even though her body is little bit stiff, the motion of hand or body is good overall.

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  4. Strong ponits

    1. Her topic was just perfect for the informative speech. It wasn't too complicated or difficult, but still it contained certain information. It was also very interesting topic.
    2. Her volume was adaquate, her pronunciation was also clear enought to understand.
    3. The way she organized her speech was clear. First she has explained definition, and then variations. So, it was easy to follow her sppech.

    What could be improved

    1. It would be better if there were some kind of wrap up of thouse variations of coffee which means conclusion was little bit short.

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