1. Liked how you made an analogical story of the protocol to each countries' representatives.
2. I think by being more enthusiastic on your voice tone, your talk could be more interesting and gather the audiences' attention, considering the topic and the contents.
3. You could improve on your conclusion by wrapping up the whole speech rather than giving your thought on the topic since the speech is heavily factual.
1. His topic is related on sience. So, for me, it is little bit difficult undertand. But since he prepared a lot with images, it could be interesting topic.
2. His voice is adequate and his articulation is clear, so I could understand easily what he wants to talk.
3. Since the structure is well organized and he used transition during the speech, I could follow the order of speech without problems.
4. His conclusion is little bit short and it is needed critics or evaluation about the topic to be a better speech.
5. His expression is adequate to explain the topic. But for me, Some words are little bit difficult. If the words are changed to more easy vocabulary, students might be more interested in his speech.
6. His gesture is nice. But Since he stares just one place and his body is little bit stiff. If he corrects these problems later, he can improve a lot!
1. Liked how you made an analogical story of the protocol to each countries' representatives.
ReplyDelete2. I think by being more enthusiastic on your voice tone, your talk could be more interesting and gather the audiences' attention, considering the topic and the contents.
3. You could improve on your conclusion by wrapping up the whole speech rather than giving your thought on the topic since the speech is heavily factual.
1. His topic is related on sience. So, for me, it is little bit difficult undertand. But since he prepared a lot with images,
ReplyDeleteit could be interesting topic.
2. His voice is adequate and his articulation is clear, so
I could understand easily what he wants to talk.
3. Since the structure is well organized and he used transition
during the speech, I could follow the order of speech without
problems.
4. His conclusion is little bit short and it is needed critics
or evaluation about the topic to be a better speech.
5. His expression is adequate to explain the topic. But for me,
Some words are little bit difficult. If the words are changed to more easy vocabulary, students might be more interested in his speech.
6. His gesture is nice. But Since he stares just one place and his body is little bit stiff. If he corrects these problems later, he can improve a lot!