1. Her presentation had a really clear structure. The effective use of hook and signposting made the organization even clearer. 2. Her voice was clear enough and the pace and intonation were also good. She spoke louder when she tried to emphasize certain points, which I think was very effective. Her pronunciation was also very clear. 3. She also did some good non-verbal communication. She constantly made eye-contact and used facial expressions. Her posture and stance was very stable. I liked the way she moved out of the podium at the end of her speech because I thought it helped her grab the audience's attention once again, just like the hook at the introduction part did. 4. But I think she spoke a little bit too fast. I guess it was because of the time limit she had - but personally I think her presentation would be even better if she can speak less faster next time.
Excelent, generally very excelent. But you still didn't catch the tempo. Remember, no matter how good or bad your english, your purpose is understanding or persuading audiences. To do that, you have to set your speed to your audience, not yourself.
Yes, Her presentation is quiet organized with using clear visual aids, such as PowerPoint. She has sevaral strong points in delivering a message in English such as natural pronuciation, proper eyecontact with audiences,natural gesture, and so on. If I find a proplem, her speed in speaking a little bit fast.
1. Her presentation had a really clear structure. The effective use of hook and signposting made the organization even clearer.
ReplyDelete2. Her voice was clear enough and the pace and intonation were also good. She spoke louder when she tried to emphasize certain points, which I think was very effective. Her pronunciation was also very clear.
3. She also did some good non-verbal communication. She constantly made eye-contact and used facial expressions. Her posture and stance was very stable. I liked the way she moved out of the podium at the end of her speech because I thought it helped her grab the audience's attention once again, just like the hook at the introduction part did.
4. But I think she spoke a little bit too fast. I guess it was because of the time limit she had - but personally I think her presentation would be even better if she can speak less faster next time.
Excelent, generally very excelent. But you still didn't catch the tempo. Remember, no matter how good or bad your english, your purpose is understanding or persuading audiences. To do that, you have to set your speed to your audience, not yourself.
ReplyDeleteYes, Her presentation is quiet organized with using clear visual aids, such as PowerPoint. She has sevaral strong points in delivering a message in English such as natural pronuciation, proper eyecontact with audiences,natural gesture, and so on.
ReplyDeleteIf I find a proplem, her speed in speaking a little bit fast.
You did a good job!